Old - Don't read this one.

This is the old version which I am hoping to improve on. I'm keeping it up to remember all those who read it and loved it - the ones who inspired me to rewrite. It's a reminder of how much I've improved, and has ideas in it that were lost in the rewrite. ~*~ As the power struggle between Embers and Demons intensifies, a disquieting vision comes to light; this time good can never win without becoming evil... With Demons growing stronger, Feya and Kelsey train to harness their magic alongside their powerless friend Tristan, only hoping his life will not be as short as theirs and that of their parents. The trio are alone in their awareness that any efforts in the power struggle will be their demise, so when an attack against Demons is organised they prepare for their downfall feeling trapped. Options are scarce until an exiled rogue, remembered for her inexplicable attack on Tristan, returns with a risky proposition; to become allies with a Demon, abandon their friends, and rip magic from the world.

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Grrr- took me a while to read the fourth page of chapter 1. Did you copy & paste from Word? It's kind of jumbled together like you had :)

MyztikalTearz

I really like this! I'm going to recommend it on the Wattpad Facebook Page today!

nlassam

thaats really, really good.
 i hope you know i think you have real talent an wouldnt be surprised if i see you on the whats hot list some time :)

ChuppaChup

Awesome :) I love your attention to detail :) and also how you let us imagine what the emotion is from the description, very nice :)

ClaireWhiteway

Oh man, this Is awesome, sorry you asked my ages ago to read this and I completely forgot!
I'm gonna read the rest now!
=]

LuLuFoS

Thought it was interesting excited to read more.  Am a bit confused as to whos talking, thinking etc when its between the two girls. Otherwise liking it a lot