Interesting plot to say the least. I enjoyed it! I shall definetly read more later.
Awesome storyline, very creative. You make everything flow together, well done! :)
Hehe jaws reference That is the fav movie of a 3 yr old I know, not my kid though. I love the flow of your writing style it is great ;)
@plaidypus I'm so jealous of you, your writing style is really good, and this first chapter has 500 more reads than all the reads on my story XD
will be reading on! please read my work the limbic's game?? ive read 3 of your chapters...so maybe do the same for me?
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