Beautifully Broken

16 Part Story 19K Reads 413 Votes
DEAnceinthedark By DEAnceinthedark Updated 9 months ago
It's easy to say that you don't care what other people think but it's so hard to play deaf when you're the hot topic of high school gossip. Addie had to learn that lesson the hard way. When the truth spread that she was physically abused by her first love Nate, the whole school didn't believe her. Not being able to take the pressure, she resorted to drastic measures. A year after her failed suicide, she begins college anew promising herself to find real friendships and   to avoid love all together. Till she meets Julian. Will she make real friends this time around? Will Nate ever take his revenge? And as she grows out of her steel shell, what happens when she finds out that Julian is Nate's estranged brother? That is, if she ever finds out.
TakiraMaine TakiraMaine 3 years ago
This sounds like a remix of Cyber Bully hint hint I look the movie and so far I llove this book keep writing and I shall read on when I get the chance tell me if you've seen the movie before :)
justdidit justdidit 3 years ago
This very well written! It's very intense chapter and you finished in the right spot, leaving the reader wanting more! :)
XShinyShinerX XShinyShinerX 3 years ago
The first chapter, hm, it's nice. :) Will continue reading from my phone! so im stopping here! Voted!!!
EverythingRed EverythingRed 3 years ago
I got goosebumps. This is really really good :) I could only read one chapter for now because I've promised others, but I'll definitely come back and read more.
WelaraJumper WelaraJumper 3 years ago
Woah, this is a very nice prologue.  It really makes me want to read on and see what happened to her/why she felt she had to do this.  Nice job :) You had really good descriptions and details, and also good spelling and grammar.  Not really much more to say, congrats on being my second 5/5. :)
MrsJungJiHoon MrsJungJiHoon 3 years ago
Hi there. I love it and it's amazing prologue.

I love the book cover and the banner because its awesome.

Keep going

I will read the rest of this story tomorrow. :) *voted*