This very well written! It's very intense chapter and you finished in the right spot, leaving the reader wanting more! :)
The first chapter, hm, it's nice. :) Will continue reading from my phone! so im stopping here! Voted!!!
Great prologue. I really like how you describe...no spelling mistakes that I've noticed. great job! =)
Okay, I think this is really amazing, I love how you've done this. And, I'm listening to Self-Conclusion right now :) Voted XD
This is sad. I think I'm gonna cry! I like this, you can really feel the emotion through the wonderful detail you provide. VOTED
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