I loved it! The storyline was really, really good and I loved how descriptive you are.
I don't particularly like stories written in the first person but you're really good. 'Looking forward to more great works from you :)
oh my goodness oh my goodness what did you just do to me oh my goodness what are you, be it demon or author or whatever you may be, what are you?
... Wow. Just... wow. I am speechless. I love the way it's written -- the imagery and all that. Wow. This story did deserve to win! :) Thumbs up!
I like the way how it's written, you didn't run out of adjectives didn't yah? i like it =)
That was so amazing!! You should continue on it! Like a story about what happens after that! It was breathtaking you're so talented!
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