WOW i'm just speechless and believe me that's quite hard to do. Why don't you pass by my stories I'm a begginer and I just wrote a lone poem
You're an amazing writer. I prefer short stories and with the best of plots in a couple of pages, you are pro!
i think this relets to our society, and how lots of women are obsessed with looking perfect. and thats what killed her, not the machine.
O.o Now that makes me nervious about approching any sort of machine that says it will help you lose body weight.
Nice work dude, your work is... interesting :) it has the right details and tells the story like it is :) awesome! keep writing!
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