A Love Slave (Vampire Romance)

42 Part Story 2.2M Reads 39.4K Votes
Linnette By Rainbow_Cadet Completed
Dreaven never knew of love, or of anything but pain. She never believed in the fairy tales that were told in stories. One night, she is thrown into a world that she never believe existed. A world where the Vampires are superior and the humans are petty slaves for entertainment and cleaning purposes. 
    Meeting her new owner Trent is anything but pleasant and she fights back with her temper. She's not about to let another man walk on her like she's gum on some ones shoe. She down with the abuse she put up with at her home. 
    Dreaven never believed in love and the only person she knew who cared in the world was her best friend and secret crush, Blake. But what happens when she finds Blake in the place she never would have imagined.
    But  the real question is will she give into Trent and accept the fact they're meant to be or will she fight and go with Blake?
    Do you dare join Dreaven in her life of misfortunes, betrayal, pain, love, and hate. To see where this new world brings her and what she finds out about herself.
omg I love this so far!~ Great writing skills, I'm in love with the story
will u guys keep ur argument till later *shakes head* the writer said comment not argue
You never need to resort to being rude to other people.  If you notice, I wasn't ever nasty or derogatory.  @Shoganai_SurgingCalm.
Well I personally feel that the long lengthy speeches are unnecessary and though your punctuation suggests you are calm, your wording feels like an attack.  Not everything is commas and exclamation points.
Ur really going to argue over something stupid, so I'm going to be the bigger person and say I'm done
                                    Your username has 'calm' in it.  
                                    Please.  Listen to the username. 
                                    What is even your problem?