need a love of editing. plot-wise its good so far but the reading was not that pleasant with all the spelling and grammatical errors.
never say i dont know how to get urself outta something..they will just say they'll teach you.say you like to watch :P
Guys I get it Rider may be an omega but he is the alpha's son it saaid at the start of the story
Love it so far but i just wanted to point something out......(was sat) doesn't make sense. It's either sat or was seated. Just thought you should know!! :D
This is a good beginning for the story (: It doesn't have a "cliche werewolf story" vibe about it (:
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