You're an interesting writer. Appreciate your diction and deft use of language. Voila!
This a a start of a really good suspense/thriller. It has a scary feel like Seven and Silence of the Lambs.
WHOA! The beginning was like a horror movie! When i saw the title i thought it was like the movie...*.*!
sounds good so far *shrug* maybe ill keep reading. From the author of The Accident (A Draco Love Story?)
This is great, I love a good mystery and the way you described things really entangled me in the plot. Im looking forward to reading more!!
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