I got confused who's the protagonist. It changed from the guys perspective to the girls point of view and a third person narrative
@dramarama Hi I'm totally a random person, but yet your friend is right. To us, Jesus Christ is a Prophet not the Messiah :)
Great story, simple yet sweet. Congrates! A story that makes me wake up early just to read before work!!
Why would he want his ex-girlfriend to come back to him?? Guess I'll have to read on...
Great start! there were a few grammer mistakes and it was more like a prologue than a blurb other than that it was great!
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