Those stories are soooo sexy!!!! It makes u wanna have sex right after you read it! ;D
Honestly the sex could have been more discriptive and there were some mistakes that probably should get fixed. But meh it was good.
That went really, really fast. Wish I could convince someone to have $ex with ME that quickly!
@trishthewriter That would be cool. Most of these short stories really do have a lot of potential for long stories. :)
This was amazing im in love with your writing and this it the first think i read. good job
seemed a litte rushed but the idea was okay. try putting in more detail of what the main character is feeling or what the expressions on the other's faces is.
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