This was so heartfelt but oh so sad. A mother's love for her child is simply amazing. I love this! This was very well written except for your spelling errors.
You're such an amazing writer. I've never read a short story before, i loved it !!!!!!!
a short yet very sad story. it might contain a tragic ending but likewise, it had a beautiful ending :)
Thats really sad but its also really beautiful in a way:/ you did a good job on it
Very abrupt :) The very meaning of short.
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Its sad that her daughter died...
And yet it's good to know that her mum can gaze up at the sky and see her daughter shine. :)
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