i like the plot its different, i want to know more background like how she became involved in a gang when she is rich, how she met abel, etc.
O_o. Well I like all the action! Kinda sad too, but great story(: Plot,detail and characters are well out there! Update.
I like it very much! It's definitely well written! It totally deserved my vote :D good job
This is good, but one suggestion. When it's a different person talking, you should start a new paragraph. Just a tip(:
I really do love the name Jace, sigh, but he seems a bit like a jackass..or am i just jumping conclusions?
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