Great story. You had me riveted to the end! I can't believe that's the ending though, is there more?
I really enjoyed this - your writing style is excellent - you use italics well and the dialogue is realistic.
this is reeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllly gooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Originality of this story is shocking me. I love end of the world stories, and yours in no different. Good job!
OOH! This is good! Ive heard of it from so many people, and they said it was good! and it iiiis... :) ;) in my lib! voted!
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