Really good, but the song was a little cheesy and it reminded me a lil too much of Tarzan but still really good.
I've had this story in my Library for aaages and i love it!! I really hope you continue it soon, I think it will be great :) Xx
That was a wonderful beginning. I wonder what really drew him to her. Seeing as gage didn't give a poo.
This is an incredible prologue! I don't know why you weren't happy with it...it certainly has me hooked ^_^
Oh. My. GOD. You have Paramore on your cover?! I LOVE THEM! Sorry, my total fan girl moment is over.
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| Name | Cookie Moretti >:D |
| Location | Licking warm honey off Gackts chest in my dungeon of luuuuuv |
| Birthday | Feb 12 |
| Member Since | Apr 09, 2011 |
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