I really like your story so far! I don't think i've read anything quite like this. :D Voted!
Your descriptions were great and I could picture everything that happened. Your character sounds realistic and believable. ^-^
wow, that was amazing!!! i loved it. Defff voted!! i don't doubt that you were in the top ten either. you have an amazing writing style. great job. xD
good story! I can see why you won this contest! it's brilliant and you should definately continue writing :)
Unbelievably excellent! Congratulations on being one of the top ten finalists. I wish the best of luck for you. :)
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