Why is it narrated, it's gets kind of confusing of who you are talking about and who's talking. BUt all in all I like it.
Ohmigosh!!! UPDATE PLEEEASE! awesome book, great plot, please don't give up and keep writing :)
Cool story so far. Looking forward to getting a more indept into this mysterious loner and why Nicky is intrigued.
One of my favorite stories that I have read so far. I hope you update very soon!
i love your simple yet very interesting story here.am looking forward with excitement on the 3rd chapter of "my blind cutomer".
I LOVE this story. , and i just started ! It would be better if it was written in first person but it's still a good book ! :D <3
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