i really though at first that.debby would be the one to confess like she has something for beth..lol nd not for michael..;D so interesting plot..
this should be published, have millions of copies sold, should be turned into a hit movie~ i'd read it, buy all the copies, and watch the movie every day!
Ooh i like this already! The open ended question at the end really leaves me wanting to know more so a very good actic to use in your story; welldone :)
Hmmm, so many chapters written already. But the story got something in it. Interesting start, I would say. So, gonna read :)
This just pulls the readers in. I most say it's really interesting to me. I like how it goes, and I didn't see any mistakes
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