The Troubles

13 Part Story 881 Reads 53 Votes
sunnyshadow By sunnyshadow Updated 3 years ago
Zara is any ordinary beautiful girl at school but after a disatrous party, she can't make her own decision. With two boys falling in love with her, one nice, one evil, she can't decided which one is right for her. At her hardworking trip at a resort, she'll just have to see where her heart guides her but something unexpected comes out of nowhere. She'll have to keep secrets and quiet and do as told.
this is really good! a couple of grammar errors but im such a nerd that's the only reason why i notice them :P apart from that, really good! you need to write another chapter! :D xx
OMG i didn't know you had this in you, Sunnyshadow :P gooooooood story keep writing!!!!!! I updated "The Player Princess" so to whoever's reading please check it out!