My Faithful Servant, Night.

21 Part Story 7.7K Reads 214 Votes
Oh Captain, My Captain By WhiteCandles Updated 3 years ago
Night and Ivy are two companions in a world of the unknown; a daunting reality where creatures of the night prowl. Yet the more Ivy begins to uncover clues about her royal past, the more she begins to wonder...Who is Night? Or rather, what is Night? Their friendship which begins as merely a master and servant relationship grows into something far more powerful, a crucial bond which is linked to exactly why Ivy was disowned from the Vampiric Monarchy. The two search for artifacts of the royal family's household...And with it, a traitor in the very midst of the hunt itself.
Your story and writing is amazing 
                                    How you describe the environment, the details are just amazing
Your a great writer. The way it just flows and the description is really good.
I found this very enjoyable. Your description is extremely good, I found it entertaining along every line and the relationship between her and night amuses me. I would hate to have her parents as my parents.
I thought this was really nicely written adn everything. Your really talented with words adn everything so yeah. Congrates
you sound like a very very smart person this is realyy really good :)
OKAY so i finally got the time lol.  very very descriptive! almost too much! sometimes if you make it too... fluffy, it distracts from the story so watch out for that.  But good start!