Oohh this is interesting!! I like it, the amount of detail is amazing! Keep it up :)
Very interesting. I love how detailed you descriptions are. Really good so far. Reading on! :)
Wow, i love how much detail you go into with your descriptions! and the bit about halloween actually made me laugh ;) This story is really good so far haha.
" that silly festival. what was it? halloween. hmmm, halloween." LOOOOL, that made me laugh :P
vampire isn't my best genre to read, but you've definitely made it a wonderful mystery ;) not many errors and great descriptions :)
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| Name | Oh Captain, My Captain |
| Location | Between the moon and stars |
| Member Since | Aug 26, 2011 |
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