Nice way to hold out on people, the suspense is really good. I applaud the way you ended this (hopefully) short part of the story.
there's definitley a flow to it, who cares about spelling? I think that it'll be interesting
i really liked it dude :D its amazing :D gonna be ur fan plz be mine and read my works :D
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