Check your capitalisation ~ some words don't need it Also check your punctuation The prologue itself, it's definite and a bit sad. D: - Emile
Cut down the first paragraph. And spell out numbers! That's the best advice I can give to you that you can fix.
really good. a little short. but i will definetly keep reading on to see what happens next. very well written too. and yes, you are a good writer!
I would love for you to say Werewolf, its really buggin me that you are shorting it :P But ill keep reading :)
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