I actually love how you didn't cheap out and give them a perfect happy ending :) congrats on making top ten :)
Oh my! this is freaking well written. you really do deserve being one of the top ten finalists. i wish you the best of luck. :)
YOU BETTER WINNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR STORY IS AAAAMMMMMAAAZZZZIIIINNNNNGGGGGG :):):):):):)
Oh my god, this story has such a great concept! Well done kellyca! Love the suspense, im looking forward to reading more of your work!
really original concept! I agree with the other comments, you should deffinetly make this a full book!
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists