I loved that example about moving the feel inches! I think it's totally ingenius, and really helped me understand how he realised what was off about the house.
Uhm WOW!!! I got pulled in immediately by the first chapter! Can't wait to finish this! Gr8 story!!!
as soon as I started reading this story, I could not put it down. I loved it. thank you for writting it
such a nice story. love this. hope you can come up with more beautiful stories like this.
She was kind of pathetic to try and be with him... I would have slapped him and left.
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