Don't take offensive to this at all because it just might be me. But the repetition of "slowly I..." Was really annoying to the point that I was cringing.
I only read the first paragraph of Jamie's P.O.V and I already hate his guts. Can't help but keep reading though.
Ahhh this is such a great story!!!! You are a great author!!! My heart is hurting from how good this was just ahhhhh I can't even handle it.
Great beginning, I was so captured by it I can't wait to move on...which I will.. starting now :D
Jerk had it coming what did he think that she would be waiting for him after the way he treated her. I\'m glad she left him.
Wow he deserves that. Just started reading this and it is turning out pretty interesting
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