Wow! That was really well written and for a first chapter not slacking in any way. It was really good.
All I know is your writing is Amazing sweetie don't stop and I won't stop reading.
i thought that this was a great first chapter. it was written well and flowed and the plot seems great. so well done.
From the first sentence, I knew that the story should go straight to the reading list. :) It's great, and it's pretty evident that you're an apt writer. :)
Very nice opening, you've introduced Charlotte's character quite well, she quite an oddball... ^__^
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| Name | Letitia Van Herck |
| Location | London, England |
| Birthday | Apr 21 |
| Member Since | Aug 29, 2011 |
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