His New Toy (boyxboy)

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Maxwell Evans is used to being abused by everyone. Why? because he is beautiful with his giant baby like blue eyes and heartbreaking smile, he is a magnet for women...and men. He is always surrounded by girls and has never had one male friend in life, this causes boys to beat him because they think his gay or they want him. Moving to a new school for fresh start he qucikly falls victim to Erick Carter, the schools hottest guy who picks people up just to dump them again. Max finds his first male friend who doesnt know what he is. Erick knows he straight...until he meets Max. Two curious boys and both want to find out what they are....Max soon finds himself in a twisted triangle.
hmm I would be up there acting like a mama bear protecting her cub
* Commas. Sorry my phones autocorrect doesn't correct. It just messes up my sentence. Kinda defeats the purpose...but no one cares.
Not a criticism, just an idea, but how about a few commons...or periods. Just a suggestion.
Oh if only that wasn't my dad's name...then my life wouldn't be awkward..
But wouldn't you rather have someone call you beautiful instead of hot because hot is more like a nice body while beautiful is more so the whole you and there is more meaning behind it
@blackXmirrors oh hai i c u omg heyyyy anyways no u iz not uglies u iz bootiful XD