I agree.. sorry to say, but maybe edit and spell check a bit. And your story will be good.
pretty amazing for a short story ..well done! life can be a scarey place ..with out family or friends it could be a lot harder!
NOOO,It wasntt boring.it was funny,amazing,thuggish and flirtable Lol but write more cuz im up to anything u write
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