I enjoyed the book, and I liked the ending because the bus was running late and just like John, he can't get out if the village....I really enjoyed it!!
oh my goodness this is soooooo good. I am about to start the third chapter and I can't seem to put it down.
I really enjoyed this book, maybe add more to it and split chapters up more easily! It was great! It gave me true goosebumps
@Laxplayr I couldn't help but see the same creature from Bedtime when John was being chased on the hill!
Nooooooo! 'No One Leaves.' Poor guy ): That story was incredible. I wonder if he too will be killed, since he wasn't actually chased by The Father.
I just couldn't stop reading! Thanks so much for posting this story, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing!
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