On a Hill

1 Part Story 9.9K Reads 177 Votes
MichaelWhitehouse6 By MichaelWhitehouse6 Updated 2 years ago
'I've never been so scared by a story. This kept me up at night for days. True horror!'

Prepare for the terror that awaits you, 'On a Hill'...
EsmeeSteck EsmeeSteck 3 months ago
This and "Off The Beaten Path" are absolutely wonderful examples of the antiquarian, M.R. James type ghost story. You are probably the first and only modern author that I've read who has managed to do the medium justice!
Sanje14S Sanje14S 4 months ago
I really enjoyed this story. I had to keep reading till the end,and that's a sure sign with me that the story is good.  I think this story is just as good as Bedtime, and I look forward to reading many more.
AliceMorris7 AliceMorris7 7 months ago
this was AMAZING I was hooked from beginning to end what a tale. the ending of the bus running late great adding to the fact no one leaves you writing skills are fantastic.
SharonPereira SharonPereira 8 months ago
@demonbird  Well that smacks of jealousy! If you don't like what you read then stop reading it. No need to comment either. @MichaelWhitehouse6 I'm totally jealous of your talent but in a good way. You inspire me to want to be a better writer. Awesome tale! V
UndefinedStrawberry UndefinedStrawberry 10 months ago
I laugh when I read horror stories.  They're just written words, how can they be scary? However, this story - and each one of your stories - gave me the creeps and I actually got scared. especially Bedtime. you're an amazing and talented author.
YvesReader YvesReader a year ago
Since this was advertised as a scary story, I read it at night in my dark living room on my iPad, and was totally creeped out. Loved this! Wil recommend this story to my book club for next October's scary Halloween story.