The metaphor is amazing! Your writing is most certainly professional and that makes me like it more! Voted
@DanGil Well I like writers that trick people and surprised them with something even better. Its a talent many do not have, me being one of them.
this... a prologue? for a vampire story... it doesn't really fit though, does it?
Where do you get your idead? Seriously your scary good. Voted. Is this a short story or is there going to be more?
I love it ^^ you really got your point across, and the description surprised me xD lol ^^
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