God Amongst Rats

4 Part Story 1.7K Reads 67 Votes
DanGil By DanGil Updated 2 years ago
Cindy was just an average, 16 year old girl, that didn't think she was special at all. That was, until, she met Jacques, the most perfect boy she had ever met. Jacques made her feel pretty, made her feel special. But Jacques has a terrible secret. He's really a vampire, and his parents hate humans. Cindy and Jacques elope, hoping to find a new life together, as Gods amongst Rats. Will they succeed in letting their light shine through? Or will the darkness crush them?
Percikingdawn Percikingdawn 3 years ago
I read the title xpecting some Omg's and lyk oder stuff and dis is wat i get? Same on u...
alibaileylovesyou alibaileylovesyou 3 years ago
that was a bit strange but i will proceed to read more i guess
NaTTyKiinz NaTTyKiinz 3 years ago
The metaphor is amazing! Your writing is most certainly professional and that makes me like it more! Voted
JenniferHartman JenniferHartman 3 years ago
@DanGil If you don't mind me asking...what is the metaphor describing?
JenniferHartman JenniferHartman 3 years ago
@DanGil Well I like writers that trick people and surprised them with something even better.  Its a talent many do not have, me being one of them.
YourHotness YourHotness 3 years ago
@DanGil i aint a human!!1! im a vampyr.. ugh ppl r so st00pid sumtymz ...