Wow! This is a great piece. Amazing vocabulary and rhyming. It's very detailed and descriptive. Really Good job :))
This was visually gripping and utterly stunning and just one of those wonderfully mystical and lyrical provoking pieces. This was brilliantly written!
The is absolutely beautiful! The writing and chose of words was fantastic and the whole poem had a flow to it. I especially loved the ending. *voted*
@nebelsaengerin Haha :P Promoted it here: http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/comment/1656583/#Comment_1656583
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