can you please stop correcting her mistakes.....don't be mean....just use your common sense..for gods sake
I get confused at first but when I read the whole story. GHAD! It was so amazing. COMPLETE PACKAGE!Nice story LOOOVED IITT :)
@heartandsoul5 this comment was ages ago if u go back lots of people wer piking mistakes out and critising the book
you could say he was staring straight at me. it makes it sound like he obviously wanted something with her
I like this story, and people need to quit being dicks. :) keep up the good work.
i have read most of your story and then I stopped and now I cant wait to read the rest XD
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