Like the story, not liking the lack of punctuation and grammar editing. It distracts from the story.
I'm a little offended, I live in Canada, and we don't live in Igloo's.. we live in houses like the rest of the world.
Woah, awesome. Keep it up, I <3 it. Check out my stories? :) ---> "I'm Supposed to be Dead?" Mean a lot, thaaanks. <3
this is excellent so far, great description and stuff :) but I LIVE IN CANADA! I'm not offended or anything, but we DON'T live in igloos.
honestly, the more i read, the more i loved it!! Just wish I could read faster so I could get through more, but every bit of it is worth my time!! lol :D
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