My Sister's Demon

12 Part Story 13.2K Reads 262 Votes
MySilverTouch By MySilverTouch Updated 7 days ago
My name is Monica Johnson. If you would notice, my life is pretty great.Great friends, Two Loving Parents, an annoying little sister. Yea life is pretty normal for me, that is until this summer. Instead of going to our summerhouse in Florida, we end up in an abandoned cabin instead.
Which is apparently haunted, not to mention that after a few days of staying, we discover we a poltergeist. But thats not even the worse part, after viciously attacking and killing our parents, a war wolf chases my sister and I down into the woods. Follow me through my extreme adventures, where there will be Anger, Triumph, Trust, Loss, Jealousy and possibly even, Love?
_cryptic _cryptic 2 years ago
 o NO you did not just cut it off like that. Awesome name "whisper" er er this could use some editing but im reading on. cause im confused on how your going to write a story on a dead girl.. unless shes a ghost :o
BfdBadGirlYo BfdBadGirlYo 2 years ago
DIED?!!! HOLY SHIZZLE...Wait Thas Some Joke Right..Surely They Can't Die...*Closes Eyes And Clicks ''Chapter One''* Here Goes....
Sharlay Sharlay 3 years ago
Love the shocking start where you immediately find out that they die! So far so good, don't think I can read anymore this late I'm too much of a chicken lolol xx
SincerelyJune SincerelyJune 3 years ago
I like the name Whisper it's so different and original, anyway this was good but maybe more details? overall I liked it.
RumellGaoaen RumellGaoaen 3 years ago
im kinda new hear but I'll say: "well that was intriguing" *clicks next chapter :3*
MentalDistortion MentalDistortion 3 years ago
That's so sad! But this is a great intriguing beginning to your story, and definitely makes me want to read on! Also I think Whisper is a really cute name. :)