Cheater [Watty Awards 2011]

26 Part Story 383K Reads 5.7K Votes
Mina By Mina Completed
What he doesn't remember... she will never forget.

"I'm going to tell you a story... And let me tell you now, it doesn't end pretty."
Since the first week of December, every Friday, one of Cole's friends goes missing.
The link?
They're always found dead.

It is something watching, something there...
Something from the past that has come for revenge.
And it will not stop until it gets it.
i can see why this won a watt pad award if you could can you please give me some constructive criticisms on my play (other than spelling and grammar) im still editing it and its called the Love i lost thank you very much
I love your work the first page makes me want to keep reading. Nice job!
Nice, I like the ending where Gwan turn out to something else
I wish I could write stories like that :( Really hope I have the talent.... Good work :D
Very discriptive & I LOVE it ! You should check out mine & give me some constructive critism (:
REALLY good so far. So descriptive and intense! Hurrying onto the next chapter now......