The Swarm

6 Part Story 1.1K Reads 30 Votes
John By whaa97 Updated 4 years ago
A tiny village is infested with a virus, and scientists from america go to investigate, but when they are all killed mysteriously they bring something home far more dangerous.
I'm not sure how I felt about the beginning, it didn't really drag me in. Great concept, perhaps check it over. Also a bit repetitive at the beginning. "He was, he had..."
I'm not sure how I felt about the beginning, it didn't really drag me in. Great concept, perhaps check it over.
Ahhh I knew it! I didn't expect people to die this soon though.
How come you gave a physical description of the boys, but not the girls? Just wondering. :P It makes me think that you're probably gonna kill off the girls in the story first.