Make your sentences more complete and try to give more feelings feels very fake yet mistrail!!!
Aww ive already commented ): but yeah, i do like her hair tho!
Try working on gramar and punctuation a little bit, i think its cute that he likes her
Justin Beiber fan fics are always funny! I love reading them, this one is my new favorite xDD
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