Can You Heal My Broken Heart?(Editing)

Cassidy has been pushed around ever since she was a little girl by her family, and class mates. She has never done anything about it, but follow what her class mates and family has told her to do. She has been use to this lifestyle for years now, but that will all change when she arrives at Penn High. Penn High happens to be a normal school, no rich kids, a couple of cute guys, and most of the time people mind their own business-that is when they choose to-. Cassidy actually likes Penn High, but its Living Water Academy that disturbs her. Living Water Academy is located directly across from her school, and is the TOTAL opposite of Penn High. She ends up in deep crap with some students that attends Living Waters, and she has come to realize that there are no escape routs. So she has to suck it up, and try her best to survive.
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Really.like the title, anyway this was well written, great descriptions, saw no spelling or grammar mistakes.
neat ... well written ... interesting ... but 5 pages for a chapter is pretty long XD 

well done though ...
Sorry :L yikes I had no intention of coming out harsh! I'm really sorry . . . it was just supposed to be constructive feedback
This sounds like a reasonable and realistic story! :) I really like it thus far! You write really well! 

Keep writing! 

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I like the story so far, very good and very descriptive....quite a few grammatical errors but mines not perfect either aha!
You're a great writer! Very descriptive. :) I really love the idea! Keep up the great work! Voted<3


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