wow! actually, I dont find this scene, malicious or pervy.. :) actually, it's sweet.. ^^ they didn't had s*x.. they made love.. :) well done, author.. XD
Hhmm.. Interesting huh? Bago to.. Sana lang hindi matanda ung uncle nya.. hahah :)) Anyway, I'll read it now! Ciao!
Its fast moving but I can see why you want to get to the good part so far! I'm reading on :D
Was pretty awesome. LOVE the descriptions and such, just a bit of misspellings but not much so that I couldn't comprehend the words so that's all fine. :)
The writing is great and all but I feel this scene was rushed in and went to quickly seeing as though they only acknowledge their feelings last chapter
really good! saw a few mistakes and maybe don't space so much? overall it was a good read! :D
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