Deep Dreams
Had you felt empty, cold, and stupid, sometimes?
Jaime is a girl with the the same problem, she got an accident, dangerous enough, she could had died, yeah she could, but she didnt, she has coma.
In all this story you will see how much Jaimes accident ruins the family, how they break apart so easy! so fast so hard.
but the question is what is in Jaimes mind while she is deeply asleep in her coma?
dont you think she is just having a deep dream.
were angels can even appear?
Recent Comments
Gracie_Strattyn
this is very good and really detailed really good and at the end its very suspense full !! =)
I've read this before haha :) it's still good the second time round though! I would vote for you again if I could :) well done!
Great descriptions. I totally agree with @OnceUponAStory7230. Fix those problems and then you're fine! (:
This is so original, It is a great chapter one and really draws the reader in. No spelling or gramma erroes I could see either so that is good.
This is an awesome start. Maybe it's just a preference of mine, but I think 'God' should be capitalized. xD Voted :DD
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