Hidden Seekers *On Hold*

23 Part Story 21K Reads 426 Votes
simmcha1 By simmcha1 Updated a year ago
I'm not going to lie, getting dreams like these aren't normal. Who else goes to bed every night and watches murders unfold? At least, I think he kills them. The person raises his finger to their pulsing veins and presses down. Through his finger, their youth drains. Eyes that held the promise of life lose their former twinkle. Children, teenagers; everyone falls for his beauty.

But when he's around, I find my heart thumping, the butterflies in my stomache erupting-and I don't know why. I’ve tried to ignore him, but it’s difficult when he always seems to be in my head. There is something connecting us, a buzz, a voice. 

Sometimes I feel as though I am slowly losing my sanity. I'm spiraling into something and I'm worried I can't crawl back out. In the end,I have to fight the pull, the need to be with him. He may have won the affections of everyone he has met, I can't be one of them. Every moment with him just adds to the bond that was set by the fates. With a secretly brewing war, a missing student, and fatal attraction, it will be a miracle if I survive this year.
Somethingtrue Somethingtrue 2 years ago
Great writing, everything was described to perfection, and your characters are really well developed(: I love the way this flows(:
Aaminah Aaminah 2 years ago
just reading the blurb draws me in soo much, it just sound soo interesting! and i dont know how you create soo long chapters, yet they don't seem to drag :) beautifully written....
beccaann13 beccaann13 2 years ago
I really like this so far :) I'm really excited to figure out more about the guy at the beginning that was staring at her! Also, your characters are so realistic and i love all of them so far, other than Victoria lol
imissubear imissubear 2 years ago
Thankz so much! I was having a hard time following but it all good now. :)) @simmcha1
imissubear imissubear 2 years ago
Why do all the evil girls have Victoria as there name? DO i look evil!? lol i like it, just, why are all the chapters mixed up?
_0055k _0055k 2 years ago
You are amazing at character development and details about the scenery. I am for sure reading more! Xx