absolutely amazing. i am in love with this story. you are a great author. your wording and style really suit my taste
Beautifully written, and a great window into the lives of two people whose interactions might have been very different under other circumstances. Nicely done.
This was really beautiful and easy to picture. :) I loved your descriptions on everything. Everything was beautiful, and I loved the ending.
I wish your story was longer you have such a unique perception of the world. This story is different which is what makes it great.
I'm with Eve 96, this should be a lot longer to be a story! This is great work, and I'd love to see it played out...
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