lol i didn't know this was a fan fic lol but yeah its good :) madi's great though! :) poor ashley though! :(
i loved how you started it off and how it flowed throughout this chapter.
haha Madison is funny xD keep it up MD
Love how you start the story in the middle of the dialogue. Also ilenjoyed the pov. MD
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