this was reely good and I liked how u ended off w/ a question to make the reader wonder and question :)
Great job I like it because it is original keep writing I think it's great also because you had great details
Wow, within such a short passage you describe the scene so well! I didn't find anything wrong with this. This is beautifully written!<3
i like it it calls for the attention also i like the cover is really nice and everything so far that i had read i like it, maybe i will put it on my library :)
Ur prolouge is a bit short bit it's enough , the story is quiet interesting - I really like it , I'm gonna keep reading :)
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