The Hand
Your eyes snap open. There is a hand, millimetres from your face, fingers outstretched, ready to grab and tear your skin away. You scream. You blink. It's gone.
For 26 years of your life you experience this horrific nightmare. Who, or what, os the hand and what is its terrible purpose?
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CC - I actually see how the hand looks like, which isn't a pretty hand. o_o' It's a creepy start. nice job. :)
This is very intriguing, I like the descriptions which you add, it creates a very clear mental image.
What I like is that it's short, simple, yet very interesting. it makes readers want to read more! good job (:
this story was really interesting... short yes but still was tempted to come back by the plot! awesome! :)
*Shivers* Alright, there goes my ability to sleep at night. Once I get to bed I AM NOT opening my eyes again (At least till morning). XD <3
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