I haven't read much yet but I'm just curious, did you do a lot of research for this story?
A couple of errors, such as spelling errors and missing words in some places. But other than that it was good and a great hook. Reading on ;)
Ahahahaaha XD this is too good ^^ awesome beginning...i cant wait to see what happens :) <3
I'll admit, I only started to read it because the first two words just happen to be my name. But I really like it.
it reminds me of some kinda.. american movie i can't .. remember ~____~ but nice beginning though! it looks promising to me ;)
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