Hidden Secrets
Love, secrets and heartbreak.
Seventeen year old, Lauri Henderson recently suffered a devastating car accident, killing both parents and her younger sister Jenny.
Luckily Lauri survived the horrid crash, but in turn had to deal with a few side effects. Remembering things from the past is very blurry, only on occasion does Lauri experience flash backs of her life... Or somebody else's.
The only other family Lauri has is her Uncle Dustin who lives days away in California. Things seem to be alright at first, only to realize that he's keeping a secret, a secret that could have changed everything.
Maybe it was for the better that her Uncle Dustin had created this secret. Without it, she never would have met the mysterious, sexy, heartbreaker that seems to push her away every time they find themselves crossing paths.
She starts to feel these funny, fluttery feelings in the pit of her stomach. Trying to ignore them, it starts to become impossible when he can't seem to escape her mind.
Lauri already lost everybody she once loved, and can't risk to feel that appalling and painful feeling ever again. So maybe, this secret was the most torturous and horrible thing created yet.
Recent Comments
WhereIsUp
A little bit confusing...but interesting, it seemed to go by really fast... But good, Reading on!(=
Love how you started. There were a few gramatical errors but those can be fixed. Keep going though cause it's really interesting!
I like your writing style but, you could use a little more description. That's all I can pick out at the moment, good story though :) voted!
Only thing I would complain is it seems a little rushed. I'll keep reading on though, its a pretty good story so far =)
Good start! The whole family in a car crash thing is a bit overused but I'm curious to see what you do with it! :)
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