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Daaamn!! This is a great start. Not much in it and a few more details could be added, but this is good. (:
Love it but there were a few grammatical errors I spotted and I wish there was more build-up on the events. Other than that, amazing :)
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You should definitely make a sequel. What happens to them? Also, more about Jay and why he does what he does. How did Chris know?.
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| Name | Raven |
| Location | In my own imaginary world |
| Member Since | Aug 07, 2011 |
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