That's the Way I Loved You

1 Part Story 392 Reads 18 Votes
Aimee Shaye By AimeeShaye Completed
chasidy goes away for the summer to Tennessee and meets a boy named Hunter who seems completely perfect.  No one knows what Hunter actually is until Chasidy brings it to their attention.  Will she stay or will she go?
nice story.. it really moves my feelings.. I hope that it has book 2.. ^__^
It was good but there were many short and choppy sentences....all you really need to work on is that though so keep up the good work :)
Mmm spaghetti...very nice story:-) the first chapter is long by wattpad standards though...but very nice:-)
@dreamwriting2611 oooh, I see.  lol, *facepalm* that explains it.  Sorry, I'm a total dumbass tonight.  Great work, though!
So far, this seems pretty entertaining!  Just a suggestion, nine pages is a LONG chapter on Wattpad; I would suggest splitting it in half, just to make it seem less daunting.  Besides for some grammatical errs and a few punctuation problems, this seems pretty solid.
                                    xoxo Helen
I like it! :D
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