this was a cool poem i never really expected it to turn out like that there are a few errors though other than that well done!
@Tri3LyriX I did not expect the ending, dear. I SUSPECTED that Sam was who Sam was. I am being cryptic to keep from saying any spoilers.
This, I dig. I was expecting the twist, but I still was surprised how it ended. I didn't think it was going to be an unrequited thing.
Nice story bro!! I love the twist too. I was wondering how the mom was alright w/ Alex parading in her underwear around Sam, but it makes sense in the end ;-)
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