I love the music choices! Those songs aren't the ones with all the cuss words and you can actually understand them lol.
Perfect music on that iPod girly! :D I love all that songs, well most of them! ♥
Why don't you make a summary for the story that way people can see what the story is about that they are reading? Loved the story by the way!!!!
You have a few spelling mistakes, but i love how i can relate to the character. :) Gud job! :D
So, I say this to everybody: watch the homonyms. You'll seem a lot smarter when you get them right.
worst title everrrr! i suggest you change it to something shorter and more generalized
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