your poem is beautifully written. i especially love the last stanza taking a commonly known phrase and changing it like that, its impacting
awww that is so sad. Heart break is an awful thing t have to go through over and over. I like the way you wrote this. Great job! voted.
Wow this is amazing! I love how this poem tells a story in such a sinister way yet still has beauty. I love this :)
love it its just absolutely well wriitten, voted!! if u have time could u chack out my poem and tell me what u think?? thx!!
there's almost absolutely no words to describe how amazing and deep this is.
holy cheese please keep writing!<3
wOW! tHAT WAS GREAT!! ANother one of your great ones. Defiantly improving and getting better!!!
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